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It was mating season but, was a solo dog

god was bored

so he bore {one more}
a special kind his mind would find
exquisitely pronounced on and
in every square decimeter of every existence existing,

granting

his ungranted longing to accomplish things but to fuck
and his ungranted
longing to do nothing but to fuck.

god wanted more.
god wanted
explicitly more.


so god made you


.and god was pleased


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without quarrel, it's magic to drown in pleasure like the flowers, no matter (what)

however,
no matter (what)

to drown still, is to suffocate
suffocation leads to disorientation
disorientation topples onto panic
panic into suicide
suicide ends to end
to end is to drown and

god got tired

then god stood up

as day-to-day arousements was antonymed down to a regular fancy.

To god you threw your tasteless kiss,
who seemed to dismiss your mimicry of bliss
(as it seems to be)


so god took you out


.and god was pleased


today,
at least
:icont-a-d:
*PoetryBattles 's "Battle Of Opposition" poetry competition
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~thoughtdisorder Sep 14, 2008  Student General Artist
This is beautiful.
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:icondamnedlostsoul:
galing... ang lalim... ang ganda ng mensahe... mahusay ka...
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:icont-a-d:
salamat pare
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~HodmadodCreations Aug 28, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome! :clap:
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~HodmadodCreations Aug 31, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
:salute:
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:icont-a-d:
thankthankyou!=)
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